The corrected sentence reads as follows:
Rachel is in New York right now. She is staying at the Park Hotel. She always stays there when she's in New York.
The following errors were corrected:
- Rachel is a noun and ought to have its first letter capitalized or made upper case.
- The same goes for New York. It should have the first letter of the words making it up capitalized because it is a noun just like the United States of America.
- She is the first word of the second sentence. The rule requires "s" in the pronoun "she" to be capitalized or made upper case. This error was corrected in the second and third sentences.
- The verb form of the word "stay" was wrong. The first sentence gives us a hint about how it should be read because it states that Rachel is currently in New York. Hence the verb form of the word "stay" should be revised into its ing Form. Because the verb form is modified, the article "is" has to be introduced.
- In the third sentence, there is a spacing error between the full stop ending sentence two, and the first word starting sentence three. That was corrected. The other correction made in the third sentence is the modification of the verb form of stay from the simple form to the -s form. So instead of saying "stay", the correct form is to say "stays".
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