What should I change in this poem?
It's called Missing Identity

When I see my true loves face
I always think I'm hallucinating
I smiled and I waved but he doesn't even look my way
I said Hi.
But he acted like I wasn't even there!
When I went home in despair

I looked at my self in the mirror.
I saw half of my face
But the other half was blurry and then disappeared
I looked away
I couldn't bear the fact
I looked in the mirror
But I still saw only half of my face
I don't know who I am
I don't know who I am
Do you I have an Identity
What do I have to live for?

Who am I
Who am I to even look at such a beautiful face like his?
Who am I to even talk to him?
I have to find my missing identity.
I need to find who I am.
I me to find out why I'm living
I need to find my fate

What is my identity?
Can you help me find it?
I need to get the other half of my soul.
What is my identity?
What is my fate?
Who will be my destined love
That will love me forever.

The poem is beautiful, there are some things that you need to fix like the first verse . You could say "I smile , I wave still knowing that he will not recognize that I'm there" , I love the last verse it's beautiful and captivating. The title is perfect it reflects what's happening. The poem shows someone who is in love and maybe because of that she/he lost her true identity and I really like that. In my opinion the poem is beautiful!.