30 points!!!! Feedback on my essay conclusion on To Kill a Mockingbird

While To Kill A Mockingbird addresses many hard-to-face topics, Jem and Scout’s loss of innocence as they mature and learn about society is the main point developed in the story. The novel focuses on Scout’s perspective and realizations about everything that occurs, such as being exposed to the black community at Calpurnia’s church, trying to understand Mr. Raymond’s reasoning for the way he lives, and coming to terms with the normalcy of the outcome of Tom Robinson’s trial. Jem and Scout’s loss of innocence throughout the novel helps add to the gravity of their maturing and fully understanding of the society of the world they live in.

I'm a descriptive writer so this isn't my forte but all feedback helps!!!! Please lmk what to add