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This is the first chapter of a book im working on. pls tell me what you think im not sure about it thanks!

This is the first chapter of a book im working on pls tell me what you think im not sure about it thanks class=

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Candygoblin

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Its good but make sure the punctuation is correct you can use Grammarly to help you with that

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It's amazing !!!! Maybe a just bit more of suspicion to grab more the reader. Also, check your grammar with Grammarly. It has helped me a lot with projects. :)

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