Can somebody tell me how my poem sounds? it's about the holocaust

The things they have stolen from us
Family, Friends, Freedom
When will it end?
Does no one see our pain?
Have they all died in vain?
and no one shall remember their names?
is no one willing to fight?
is your bark bigger than your bite?
then who shall I ask can save us?
Is this the Lord's plan for us up for no discuss?
Do we just leave it to him and deal with the cuts?
How many more of us have to die?
How many more have to say goodbye?