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Michael is giving his friend feedback on her paper. Which two sections of his review contain constructive feedback?

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Shofhia

As there wasn't any choices, research was done.

I would suggest working on word choice, since you used the same words many times in the essay. Use a thesaurus to find synonyms if you need to.

Good luck though!! :D

IsaakDrunken

Two sentences are:

1. However, I though the section with the pie-eating contest wasn't very interesting. It just made me want to stop reading the essay.

2. I would suggest working on word choice, since you used the same word many times in the essay. Use a thesaurus to find synonyms if you to.

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