1. What change, if any, is needed in sentence 4?
A. Remove the comma after Moreover.
B. Replace the comma with a colon.
C. Change alot to a lot.
D. Make no change.

2. What change, if any, is needed in sentence 7?
A. Replace the comma with a semicolon and change their to there.
B. Change they’re to their and their to there.
C. Take out the semicolon.
D. Make no change.

3.What change, if any, is needed in sentence 25?
A. Replace the comma after Avenue with a semicolon.
B. Replace the comma after fair with a colon.
C. Replace the comma after fair with a semicolon and take out the comma after Ohio.
D. Make no change.

4. What change, if any, should be made in sentence 18?
Change successful to successfull.
Change diverse to divirse.
Change multitalented to multi-talented.
Make no change.

5.What change, if any, is needed in sentence 8?
A. Change person’s to persons’.
B. Enclose the word indeed in commas.
C. Enclose the word indeed in a comma and a semicolon.
D. Make no change.

6. Which is the best revision, if needed, of sentence 3?
A. Going out and finding that first job is taking courage.
B. Going out and finding that first job takes courage.
C. Going out, and finding that first job takes courage.
D. Make no change.

7. What change, if any, is needed in sentence 1?
A. Change The to the.
B. Remove the comma after said.
C. Move the period to the outside of the quotation marks.
D. Make no change.

8. What change if any, is needed in sentence 14?
A. Add a colon after period.
B. Add a semicolon after period.
C. Add an em dash after period.
D. Make no change.
9. What change, if any, could be made in sentence 10?
A. Change work that is very challenging to very challenging work.
B. Change like constant social interaction to liking constant social interaction, and C. work that is very challenging to challenging work.
D. Change work that is very challenging to be working with much challenge.
D. Make no change.

10. What change, if any, is needed in sentence 22?
A. Change to change to to changing and affect to effect.
B. Change to change to to changing.
C. Change affect to effect.
D. Make no change.

11. Which is the best revision of sentence 5?
A. High-school students, if they can get one, to have a part-time job can be greatly beneficial for several reasons.
B. If a high-school student can get a part-time job, it can be greatly beneficial for several reasons.
C. If they can get one, highschool students greatly benefit from having a part-time job for several reasons.
D. If getting a part-time job, a high-school student can be greatly benefitted, for several reasons.

12. What change is needed in sentence 20?
A. Change twentytwo to twenty-two.
B. Change well written to well-written and twentytwo to twenty-two.
C. Change However, to However: and twentytwo to twenty-two.
D. Change lifetime to life time.

13. What change, if any, is needed in sentence 21?
A. Change excepted to accepted.
B. Change faithful to faithfulness.
C. Change five years to five-years.
D. Make no change